ملتقى مونمس ® - عرض مشاركة واحدة

**Miss CoCo** · 04-16-2012, 02:52 PM

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة A H M E A D

Welcome my sister

How are you?
welcome bro
glad to see you

I hope you're in good mood
Let's start
hhhhhh...yes yes the mood is fine
I liked the beginning a lot because

it gave a good introduction to the poem
The boy description was perfect
glad to know that ...i thougt that the beginning wasthe weakest part
The girl was exploitative
why ..the boy do that ..she didn,t force him to
But it seems that the boy was trying to satisfy her
selfishness
The end of the poem were not the beautiful as
the beginning of the poem
I'm sorry
hhhhhh..no need to apologaize .. just wait and see how i, look when some one opposite my opinion..just kidding
I wished that you're good mood for my opinion
Hahahahaha
I think the boy has served this girl
until the end
Great poem
God bless you my sister

and you too bro ..you too

Bye

see ya