coloured rain_poem

**Miss CoCo** · #1 03-17-2012, 04:43 PM

peace on you my friends
this is one of my poems in english ..I hope you ,ll enjoy

the facts had shown ..

the sun had dawn

No mask will do .

.nor a fake gown

The peace will come .

.in every land

So ..why you ,re here ?

Open your eyes ..and give me your hand

The dark won't end..

if you didn't stand

Did you asked your self ..about that rain ??

How can it heal the soul ..and wash all the pain??

It’s the want of life ..in that drops

Which get to our hearts ..with out any maps

Colourless drop ..had the secret of living

All the colors of the earth ..

From its giving ..

Because it hadn't been here in vain

So are you ..me and every one

We have a rule ..

In this play ..

we have to act ..

we have to stay

to make the right ..

and wait for light

just ..take that in sight

and that,s it
have a good time when you read it
see ya

التوقيع :

coco is here

التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة Miss CoCo ; 03-18-2012 الساعة 03:05 PM

**تيماري ساما** · 03-17-2012, 05:03 PM

woooooOoooooow
whats this my sister
oh!!!!!!!!!!
thank you very match
see you

**Smile hope** · 03-17-2012, 05:12 PM

Thank you very much
What are these words
O creator
I enjoyed Balaqrap
I hope to always reconcile
Commendable
see you>

**ســـيـبـرو** · 03-17-2012, 06:02 PM

wooooow
you are a wonderful lass !!
thank you very much
this is a nice poem
and you well done
I like the name it`s beautiful ^_^

**كيني** · 03-17-2012, 11:07 PM

oooh,yeaaaaaah my darling this is the job..u created as usual...the clutch is so seemly with the subject..add-on the idea and the words are good...I want more^ ^..my greetings

**misa.** · 03-17-2012, 11:36 PM

this is amazing i can,t
belive it you, re awsome
you can create a road for being a star
wish you the best of all
see you
^-^

**Miss CoCo** · 03-18-2012, 03:10 PM

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة اريج الاموره

Thank you very much
What are these words
O creator
I enjoyed Balaqrap
I hope to always reconcile
Commendable
see you>

it,s my pleasure you enjoyed it
thank you sis
wish you the best

**Miss CoCo** · 03-18-2012, 03:13 PM

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ســـيـبـرو

wooooow
you are a wonderful lass !!
thank you very much
this is a nice poem
and you well done
I like the name it`s beautiful ^_^

oh glad to know you loved it
thanks for you love

**Miss CoCo** · 03-18-2012, 03:15 PM

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة كيني

oooh,yeaaaaaah my darling this is the job..u created as usual...the clutch is so seemly with the subject..add-on the idea and the words are good...I want more^ ^..my greetings

wait for more dear
wait for more ..special le 3yoonk
hhhhhhhhhh
I meant your eyes