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Miss CoCo 03-17-2012 04:43 PM

coloured rain_poem
 
peace on you my friends
this is one of my poems in english ..I hope you ,ll enjoy
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the facts had shown ..


the sun had dawn


No mask will do .


.nor a fake gown


The peace will come .


.in every land


So ..why you ,re here ?


Open your eyes ..and give me your hand


The dark won't end..


if you didn't stand


Did you asked your self ..about that rain ??


How can it heal the soul ..and wash all the pain??


It’s the want of life ..in that drops


Which get to our hearts ..with out any maps


Colourless drop ..had the secret of living


All the colors of the earth ..


From its giving ..


Because it hadn't been here in vain


So are you ..me and every one


We have a rule ..


In this play ..


we have to act ..


we have to stay


to make the right ..


and wait for light


just ..take that in sight

and that,s it
have a good time when you read it
see ya :006:

تيماري ساما 03-17-2012 05:03 PM

رد: coloured rain_poem
 
woooooOoooooow
whats this my sister
oh!!!!!!!!!!
thank you very match
see you


Smile hope 03-17-2012 05:12 PM

رد: coloured rain_poem
 
Thank you very much
What are these words
O creator
I enjoyed Balaqrap
I hope to always reconcile
Commendable

see you>

ســـيـبـرو 03-17-2012 06:02 PM

رد: coloured rain_poem
 
wooooow
you are a wonderful lass !!
thank you very much
this is a nice poem
and you well done
I like the name it`s beautiful ^_^

كيني 03-17-2012 11:07 PM

رد: coloured rain_poem
 
oooh,yeaaaaaah my darling this is the job..u created as usual...the clutch is so seemly with the subject..add-on the idea and the words are good...I want more^ ^..my greetings

misa. 03-17-2012 11:36 PM

رد: coloured rain_poem
 
this is amazing i can,t
belive it you, re awsome
you can create a road for being a star
wish you the best of all
see you
^-^

Miss CoCo 03-18-2012 03:10 PM

رد: coloured rain_poem
 
اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة اريج الاموره (المشاركة 690487)
Thank you very much
What are these words
O creator
I enjoyed Balaqrap
I hope to always reconcile
Commendable
see you>


it,s my pleasure you enjoyed it
thank you sis
wish you the best:icon31:

Miss CoCo 03-18-2012 03:13 PM

رد: coloured rain_poem
 
اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ســـيـبـرو (المشاركة 690593)
wooooow
you are a wonderful lass !!
thank you very much
this is a nice poem
and you well done
I like the name it`s beautiful ^_^

oh glad to know you loved it
:blushing:thanks for you love

Miss CoCo 03-18-2012 03:15 PM

رد: coloured rain_poem
 
اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة كيني (المشاركة 690950)
oooh,yeaaaaaah my darling this is the job..u created as usual...the clutch is so seemly with the subject..add-on the idea and the words are good...I want more^ ^..my greetings

wait for more dear
:evil_lol:wait for more ..special le 3yoonk
hhhhhhhhhh
I meant your eyes

Miss CoCo 03-18-2012 03:17 PM

رد: coloured rain_poem
 
اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة misa. (المشاركة 690990)
this is amazing i can,t
belive it you, re awsome
you can create a road for being a star
wish you the best of all
see you
^-^

you ,re the awsome love
:006:all my best wishes for you ..glad to hear your opinion


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