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السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته Hey everyone, what's up? Sooo, I've wrote my first English poetry!  I was just bored and I decided to DO SOMETHING NEW!  It's kind of funny & romantic. O_O Other words: crazy poetry! XD I hope you like it. Here we go: ---------------- you're smile make me fly! If you're sad, I'm going to die! BUT, if you betrayed me, and you made me cry; I'll kick you too high, to the point where I can see you flying in the sky!!  ---------------- So, What are you think, crazy huh? ×_O ~Wanna see you comments~ See u
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وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته
welcome fiend haha nice...it's beautiful masha allah thanks brother
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08-20-2011, 11:39 PM
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 وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله welcome friend nice to meet you ^_^ hahaha nice very nice really .. i like it i like to raed any thing by english launguge as you know .. its improve your skils ^_^ any way its a first topic .. about poetry good choice but .. all of this words .. for who ?!! XD look you wrote .. going to die better to you ..mmm try to get his sadness or better to say try to make him happy ^_^ becuse .. when you like some one by this crazy shape .. haha im kidding lets back you must to help him and but him out of his sadness is it right ?!! ^_______^ thanks sarutobe for this nice and funny petry im witing more from you so .. go ahead and keep moving by this way ^^ thanks a lot see you 
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08-21-2011, 07:57 AM
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Thank you
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08-21-2011, 08:33 AM
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So Cute masha allah
for you if u wana write topic , make like that so tht why people writing by fast i,m jelous from who wrote some poet cuese its injuerd my body and made me Fat note: i made it through 1 minitue how is that kids?? haha so coool keep your way in& development & improvment & evolution too so see ya in another topic we,re waiting a newest
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09-01-2011, 09:08 PM
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GOD BLESS YOU
NICE WORDS KEEP UP
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