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Elomar 08-17-2011 04:55 PM

My first English Poetry
 
السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته


Hey everyone, what's up?
Sooo, I've wrote my first English poetry! :D
I was just bored and I decided to DO SOMETHING NEW! :)
It's kind of funny & romantic. O_O
Other words: crazy poetry! XD
I hope you like it.
Here we go:

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you're smile make me fly!
If you're sad, I'm going to die!

BUT, if you betrayed me, and you made me cry;

I'll kick you too high, to the point where I can see you flying in the sky!! :p
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So, What are you think, crazy huh? ×_O
~Wanna see you comments~
See u



gogeta 08-17-2011 07:09 PM

رد: My first English Poetry
 
very fantastic poetry
and the words of it very cute ass well
thxxxxxxx you soooo much for poetry
my Greetings

Hero. 08-18-2011 08:07 PM

رد: My first English Poetry
 
so prity
thank you very much

سحر الخيال 08-20-2011 09:52 PM

رد: My first English Poetry
 
وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته
welcome fiend
haha
nice...it's beautiful
masha allah
thanks brother

ضوء الفجر 08-20-2011 11:39 PM

رد: My first English Poetry
 
:smoke1:
وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله

welcome friend
nice to meet you
^_^
hahaha
nice very nice
really .. i like it
i like to raed any thing by english launguge
as you know .. its improve your skils
^_^
any way
its a first topic .. about poetry
good choice

but .. all of this words .. for who ?!! XD
look
you wrote .. going to die
better to you ..mmm
try to get his sadness or better to say
try to make him happy
^_^
becuse .. when you like some one by this crazy shape .. haha
im kidding
lets back
you must to help him
and but him out of his sadness
is it right
?!!
^_______^
thanks sarutobe for this nice and funny petry
im witing more from you
so .. go ahead
and keep moving by this way
^^
thanks a lot
see you
:bye1:

ʕۣʔيعہّذبنٌي,غہہلاٌآآكـٌ 08-21-2011 07:57 AM

رد: My first English Poetry
 
Thank you

Hollow MasteR 08-21-2011 08:33 AM

رد: My first English Poetry
 
So Cute masha allah

for you

if u wana write topic , make like that

so tht why people writing by fast
i,m jelous from who wrote some poet
cuese its injuerd my body and made me Fat

note: i made it through 1 minitue

how is that kids??


haha

so coool


keep your way in& development & improvment & evolution too

so
see ya in another topic
we,re waiting a newest

A H M E A D 09-01-2011 09:08 PM

رد: My first English Poetry
 
GOD BLESS YOU
NICE WORDS
KEEP UP

ώ ђ м❥« 09-02-2011 10:44 PM

رد: My first English Poetry
 
Thank you

asdv 09-05-2011 10:59 AM

رد: My first English Poetry
 
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
very nice poetry
I enjoyed it so much
thanks for the wonderful topic


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