complait the story

**ضوء الفجر** · #1 04-13-2011, 08:28 PM

welcone gusy
I have new Idea ....
let’s make some enjoyment some entertainment

I will write a story but you will complete it
okay

let’s start ...... :
someday there were three friends
one of them is so Nervous and the other one is fat but the last one is normal and simple
some day they read about Hole but not any Hole
this Hole make your dearm truth but
if your dream was bad to the Magician you will die
the Magician live in this Hole
Both who went to the magician died
With their dreams were normal.... rich . king ....etc
the fat man like this but .......

now
come on guys .... I challenge you
Complete the story

كل ما يرد واحد يكمل على اللي قبله .........

good luck

-:مواضيع أخرى تفيدك:-

التوقيع :

when we will sincere .. we can built any thing

سبحان الله وبحمده .. سبحان الله العظيم

التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة ضوء الفجر ; 04-13-2011 الساعة 09:02 PM

**Hollow MasteR** · 04-14-2011, 06:43 PM

Nice idea
miss.fajr lighter

i like it

the complete

the fat like this but he sacred from the bad luky
becuse its possible his dream will be transform to a bad dream

but after Long the decision
he begin to walking to the hole
he want to his dream to be realized
Not aware of the danger around him
so
where we arrived?
mmm
yeah he arrived in the wanted place

complete

wow
that was a hard game

......

i wrote it
على حسب فهمي

complete guys

**ضوء الفجر** · 04-15-2011, 11:32 PM

welcome friend ....
really .... hard game you mean this topic
>_<
back to our topic
nice ... I like it
good imagain ... good wtiter
masha allah
^__^

....
now ..... the complait

the fat man get in that hole
but when he looked around him .... he found message
but this massage its full of blood

he scared and wanted to back to his home
but when he Remembered his dream .... his legs moved
toward the message ......

wait .... stop
what happen ??!!!

complait ............

^_^
see you guys

**Hollow MasteR** · 05-04-2011, 09:21 PM

ech ny one came here was dead
young,old,big,small

Will not show him any mercy
so you can select
getting your dream or dead for complete your wlking
or
Go back to your home and rest

his face is chnge to blcck from scred
he know now
nother guys who came here was ded all of them
was dead

its your lap guys

**ضوء الفجر** · 05-05-2011, 11:12 PM

ok good
good work ...
^_^

lets start ......
then
he chose to back to his home
when he returned to his home
he saw old man .... this man told him
blood ... swim in the blood
he was scared and run awy
in this time his friend wanted to go to the shopping
to search something ... something to his party
but when he walked ... he saw someone cry
cry with Moan

but beacuase he had a white heart he went to asked that person
he said to him : what’s up
do you need something
but that person looked to him with his evil eyes
and said ..... get away from me
I .. I ... I ...
then the person screamed and run

complete
^_^

**Hollow MasteR** · 05-07-2011, 07:52 PM

but he stopped to know wht happen to this men
he begun to allow behind him

he note he enter in his home
from the window

he See something strange
he put a roap in the middle room

before that
the fat men wrote his last massage before
he field his life
and he finished

the polite man couldn,t belive that
man:no..you cant do it no,noooooooooo

but
Too late

complete guys

wht happend to the fat men with a roap

**ضوء الفجر** · 05-10-2011, 04:19 PM

noo.. why
he was soo kind .... >_<

.....
when he saw that ... he called the police men
but they coudnt arrive to his home
beacuase the Bridge which take them to his home was broke
his friend felt ... there is something wrong
first that afriad person then his friend
did he killed himslef ? no it cant happen
but why ...
.. in this time ... he remembered face .. face of his friend
when he found the paper which told them about the hole

then .. quickly he went to his friend criss
criss criss answer me .. open the door
wiliam is died...criss
whats up ... hey man answer me
but he did not answer him

now... he felt ... his life will change after he saw that paper

and he promised him self .. to help his Nervous freind criss
now .. he Decided to go to that hole or meet that afrid person
to know what happen
he took a knife with him and wore a strange Clothing

.... waht will happen
if you want to know ..... compite the story
^_^

**سحر الخيال** · 05-13-2011, 12:54 PM

topic’s idea is fantastic
masha allah
I was keen to complete it
but I don’t know how ?

he was afraid but he insisted on meeting up him
for that changed his figure because
not know him any person
he completed his road

until arrived to hole
next to the hole he found that person still cry

ran to him
but when he arrived
that person looked to him by red eyes
and

said
what ..what are you want to do?
are you want to kill me too?
I won’t let you do that

what are you said?
no .I did not do any thing

your lap
complete
I know my complemnt is soo baaaaaad
but this what got out from my brain

**ضوء الفجر** · 05-14-2011, 02:09 AM

nooo . its good
nice really .. ^_^
masha allah
and nice to meet you here sister

ok ... its my lap
when he heard that.. he afraid
then he promised him .. he will never do this ..
then he told him... look
my name is jack i have two frinds
today one of them is died ...and the another one is disappeared but where... i dont know

but the man answer him .... shut up ... why you tell me your live story
I dont care about you get away from me ...
then they heard a voice its comming from the hole
its comming from inside...
its like a snake.. kill I want to kill

that person run but our fraind ... got in the hole
he said.... i know this voice.. i know him
but when he became near from this sound...
old wemon came from the dark
now im tired ... complete it and i will read it ....
good night guys... i go to sleep
i have school tomorrow ... so see you again

**سحر الخيال** · 05-16-2011, 03:21 PM

welcome again
really?
thanks a lot
nice to meet you too

lets complete
............

when she saw him ..she said
please, getting out me

he did that and got out her from the hole
at that time he asked her why she was there

she told him
I heard cry voice for that.. I went to know what happened
when I neared ..I put my hand on his shoulder
he looked me and paid me in that hole
then I fell in it
I thought I could not see anyone here
thank you my son to help me

mm excuse me
did you see anyone in my age near here ?

yes, I did

really

I think he went to that old house
............

that enough
now complete