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افتراضي رد: complait the story

ok good
good work ...
^_^

lets start ......
then
he chose to back to his home
when he returned to his home
he saw old man .... this man told him
blood ... swim in the blood
he was scared and run awy
in this time his friend wanted to go to the shopping
to search something ... something to his party
but when he walked ... he saw someone cry
cry with Moan


but beacuase he had a white heart he went to asked that person
he said to him : what’s up
do you need something
but that person looked to him with his evil eyes
and said ..... get away from me
I .. I ... I ...
then the person screamed and run

complete
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