coloured rain_poem

[Miss CoCo]

 

peace on you my friends
this is one of my poems in english ..I hope you ,ll enjoy


the facts had shown ..


the sun had dawn


No mask will do .


.nor a fake gown


The peace will come .


.in every land


So ..why you ,re here ?


Open your eyes ..and give me your hand


The dark won't end..


if you didn't stand

Did you asked your self ..about that rain ??


How can it heal the soul ..and wash all the pain??


It’s the want of life ..in that drops


Which get to our hearts ..with out any maps


Colourless drop ..had the secret of living


All the colors of the earth ..


From its giving ..


Because it hadn't been here in vain


So are you ..me and every one


We have a rule ..


In this play ..


we have to act ..


we have to stay


to make the right ..


and wait for light


just ..take that in sight

and that,s it
have a good time when you read it
see ya

التوقيع :

coco is here

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التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة Miss CoCo ; 03-18-2012 الساعة 03:05 PM

[تيماري ساما]

woooooOoooooow
whats this my sister
oh!!!!!!!!!!
thank you very match
see you

[Smile hope]

Thank you very much
What are these words
O creator
I enjoyed Balaqrap
I hope to always reconcile
Commendable
see you>

[Miss CoCo]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة اريج الاموره Thank you very much What are these words O creator I enjoyed Balaqrap I hope to always reconcile Commendable see you>

it,s my pleasure you enjoyed it
thank you sis
wish you the best

[ســـيـبـرو]

wooooow
you are a wonderful lass !!
thank you very much
this is a nice poem
and you well done
I like the name it`s beautiful ^_^

[Miss CoCo]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ســـيـبـرو wooooow you are a wonderful lass !! thank you very much this is a nice poem and you well done I like the name it`s beautiful ^_^

oh glad to know you loved it
thanks for you love

[كيني]

oooh,yeaaaaaah my darling this is the job..u created as usual...the clutch is so seemly with the subject..add-on the idea and the words are good...I want more^ ^..my greetings

[Miss CoCo]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة كيني oooh,yeaaaaaah my darling this is the job..u created as usual...the clutch is so seemly with the subject..add-on the idea and the words are good...I want more^ ^..my greetings

wait for more dear
wait for more ..special le 3yoonk
hhhhhhhhhh
I meant your eyes

[misa.]

this is amazing i can,t
belive it you, re awsome
you can create a road for being a star
wish you the best of all
see you
^-^

[Miss CoCo]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة misa. this is amazing i can,t belive it you, re awsome you can create a road for being a star wish you the best of all see you ^-^

you ,re the awsome love
all my best wishes for you ..glad to hear your opinion