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peace on you frinds I hope you all right I,ve just finished this moments ago I hope you like it ................ Have a time to hear Have a heart to share The story of girl ..maybe far Or near She ,s been told to seek Just seek and seek Not to cry ..not to speak Just like war She had to fight There is no rose. no star in sight Fight and fight Who is the wrong .. Who is the right There is no space for going back The future seems. darker than black ******* The way was hard Tears and tears Sadness and fears There wasn't a trace In that endless race Memories was the only way That led her to his face Oh lord ..how could be The only escape for her from night The shining light ..that pure bright Charmed eyes .. Darker than black ****** Look here ..or there Her broken wings In every where The life was a stair She had to climb The songs of fate Weren't in rhyme On and on On the stair The screams of lost Can not be bear The tones were pure When he was here No time to talk No way back Her hope had eyes Darker than black .................. and that,s all see ya |
7 أعضاء قالوا شكراً لـ Miss CoCo على المشاركة المفيدة: |
04-06-2012, 04:40 PM | رقم المشاركة : 2 |
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رد: Darker than Black
مهمممم .. لي عودة ان شاء الله
^^ تسلمي قلبو .. مقدما welcome again masha allah on you cant describe what i felt but what i can say .. a lot of feeling lonely.. grudge .. hate .. sad or fight.. shine .. and maybe strong whatever ..it was hurt this what i believe on thanks alot coco ^^ Just seek and seek Not to cry ..not to speak how poor ... i wonder if any one can help her >< تاثرت كثير .. XDD يعطيكي العافية خيتو كثير حبيت الموضوع .. .. but the sadness covered it right.. >< ماشاء الله خيتو .. كتباتك كثير حلوة .. خسارة ان كان المعنى حزين ^^ sorry but i felt that thanks a gain see you
آخر تعديل ضوء الفجر يوم 04-08-2012 في 07:13 AM.
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04-08-2012, 05:27 PM | رقم المشاركة : 3 | |
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رد: Darker than Black
welcome back sis you don,t know my happiness for your response ^^glad to know you liked it cant describe what i felt and that what I want dear but the sadness covered it right.. >< hhhhhhhhhh oh dear ..this is the happier one of my writings ماشاء الله خيتو .. كتباتك كثير حلوة .. خسارة ان كان المعنى حزين
^^ تسلميلي عالأطراء يمكن ان كان المعنى حزين ..يكون اجمل wait for the next one it will be covered with evil ...I hope you like evil thanks alot lighto ..thanks alot
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04-08-2012, 05:29 PM | رقم المشاركة : 4 |
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رد: Darker than Black
تم فك الحجز
آخر تعديل A H M E A D يوم 04-08-2012 في 09:25 PM.
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04-08-2012, 06:54 PM | رقم المشاركة : 5 |
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رد: Darker than Black
ماشاء الله تبارك الرحمن ...ماشاء الله وبارك
is this on of your writings? I liked it your style in writing very very wonderful masha allah God save you sis the topic full of sadness but it's beautiful too she made me felt pity on her poor girl >< .....her life is affictive thanks sis to show us one of your writings and go ahead
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04-08-2012, 08:24 PM | رقم المشاركة : 6 |
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رد: Darker than Black
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04-08-2012, 09:24 PM | رقم المشاركة : 8 |
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رد: Darker than Black
What a stylish text
On the contrary, I see a realistic girl Living reality in all its details Despite the grief and circumstances Still looking for what she want No time to talk No way back Her hope had eyes Darker than black I felt that in its opinion that what She looking for More powerful than the darkness that prevails in her world Explicitly I barely envy her on this vision I hope that you keep in such poems written by Successful long as you
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04-09-2012, 06:12 PM | رقم المشاركة : 9 | |
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رد: Darker than Black
hope you like darkness and evil ..to wait for the next one see ya
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04-09-2012, 06:20 PM | رقم المشاركة : 10 | |
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