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Miss CoCo 07-12-2012 08:45 PM

won,t be yours
 


peace on you guys
how are you
how are your kitties
hope they are fine
mmmmmmmmmm
i know ...i know
the poster is small
and um too lazy to make it larger
let,s begin
..................




Empty eyes



Hollow promises



countless lies



whose nightmare is this?



Give me a trace in this foggy road



I'm getting crazy ..every one had been told



Just I'll say to you all



I've been fooled



By a lifeless doll



Just tell me for



The heaven sake



Which way ..



I should take



If all my dreams



Were mere fake



Turn the hour hand back wards



My heart won't be yours



................



Fast ..fast



I've been running fast



I've been chased by



my colorless past



things are different ..from what they seem



can any body ..hear my scream



singing alone



knowing that ..life goes on



can't be stopped ..or trembled by



my luck stone



just with out ..why ..because



my silly heart



won't be yours



hope you liked it:evil_lol:


see ya



كيني 07-12-2012 09:08 PM

رد: won,t be yours
 
:006::006::006::006::006:
oooooh yaaaa my darling...always shining..i liked it very very much...and i touched the madness in the poster as u called it..let me ask u a Q for whom those words??confess??
:rose::rose::rose:

لارسا 07-12-2012 09:28 PM

رد: won,t be yours
 
WOOOooooOw...so good..the title ,the picture as well as the smart idea..u r talented sis.

~ملكة الاحساس~ 07-12-2012 10:35 PM

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Thanks so very beautiful sister Thread
Dzaki God's goodness Tqubla traffic

العنكبوت 07-13-2012 06:30 AM

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wooooow~~

ضوء الفجر 07-15-2012 12:03 PM

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welcome sis
how are you
^^
im really happy to see you dear
sorry for late ..
ehhem
masha allah .. as we know you sis
i liked the topic form his title
evey thing made me say .. you are shine .. able to be write like this meaning
which include a lot of things
maybe thats crazy but .. however i think won't be yours .. its hurtl
just to knowing .. i hate the sad end
><
this what i called it .. professional
masha allah
with all of that .. i cant discribe what i felt by words
^^

finally
please .. let me enjoy
let me swim .. farther and farther on the ocean of your ideas
waitting your best dear
^^

A H M E A D 07-15-2012 11:31 PM

رد: won,t be yours
 
Welcome
again :Mon63:
A beautiful poem
You have creative ideas:Mon40:
........
As usual
Strong girl
Smart girl
and realistic:Mon11:

I've been running fast

I've been chased by

my colorless past ... i love it
................... :Mon106:

Miss CoCo 07-30-2012 04:26 PM

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wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow
what a poem
i liked it sooo much
and i liked that crazy girl
her hair is pretty
what an artist you are coco

Amazing Misa 07-31-2012 11:06 PM

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you did a great job
did you write it , it's really awesome
but i can't believe you wrote it

misa. 08-10-2012 01:00 PM

رد: won,t be yours
 
wwwwoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwww
you are an awesome writer
amazing poem
keep up the excellent work


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