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peace on you my friends this is one of my poems in english ..I hope you ,ll enjoy https://im26.gulfup.com/2012-03-17/1331991558781.jpg the facts had shown .. the sun had dawn No mask will do . .nor a fake gown The peace will come . .in every land So ..why you ,re here ? Open your eyes ..and give me your hand The dark won't end.. if you didn't stand Did you asked your self ..about that rain ?? How can it heal the soul ..and wash all the pain?? It’s the want of life ..in that drops Which get to our hearts ..with out any maps Colourless drop ..had the secret of living All the colors of the earth .. From its giving .. Because it hadn't been here in vain So are you ..me and every one We have a rule .. In this play .. we have to act .. we have to stay to make the right .. and wait for light just ..take that in sight and that,s it have a good time when you read it see ya :006: |
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woooooOoooooow whats this my sister oh!!!!!!!!!! thank you very match see you |
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Thank you very much
What are these words O creator I enjoyed Balaqrap I hope to always reconcile Commendable see you> |
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wooooow
you are a wonderful lass !! thank you very much this is a nice poem and you well done I like the name it`s beautiful ^_^ |
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oooh,yeaaaaaah my darling this is the job..u created as usual...the clutch is so seemly with the subject..add-on the idea and the words are good...I want more^ ^..my greetings
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this is amazing i can,t
belive it you, re awsome you can create a road for being a star wish you the best of all see you ^-^ |
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it,s my pleasure you enjoyed it thank you sis wish you the best:icon31: |
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oh glad to know you loved it :blushing:thanks for you love |
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wait for more dear :evil_lol:wait for more ..special le 3yoonk hhhhhhhhhh I meant your eyes |
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you ,re the awsome love :006:all my best wishes for you ..glad to hear your opinion |
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Machae God .. Great Words were very impressive, .. I liked a lot .. Keep on this way Thank you for your topic ヤナ |
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لا انا ما فهمت كل الكلمات شو قالولكم انا معلمة انقليزي
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حجز .. ^^ يحتاج جلسة baaaacckkk how wonderful sis .. first sorry for late >< let me sharing with you .. this nice words masha allah you dont know .. how i enjoyed yes.. this what i like a lot of wisdoms a lot of truths fight ..light .. right.. all this will give you the realy live hope.. what we have to full by ^^ We have a rule .. In this play .. we have to act .. we have to stay to make the right .. hey sis .. where did you hide all this its really awesome masha allah ^^ So are you ..me and every one soo great .. ^^ .. nice masha allah Did you asked your self ..about that rain ?? How can it heal the soul ..and wash all the pain?? It’s the want of life ..in that drops Which get to our hearts ..with out any maps i liked it how beateful sis .. how .. i dont have any thing to say but .. the meaning which you got it .. and how you describe it .. that what i amazed from allah save you really you have a good imagination finally.. the meaning which you made .. made me stand by all the thanks for you have you get it .. XDD very excellent .. it's fewer what can I say about your poem see ya soon sis ^^ |
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WOW
that's cool thank you very much |
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thanks you dear for sharing your opinion hope you enjoyed it |
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Beautiful ... Beautiful
Do you demand a revolution:005:???? I think the idea is stronger than words Or perhaps the words simplest this time ..................... My respect for your pen And for your thoughts:icon30: |
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تم فك الحجز .. ^^ |
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this is the best poem I had ever seen
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woooooooooooooooow
Thank you |
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السلام عليكم ورحمه الله وبركاته
شكرا على ابداعك في الانجليزي وتعجز كلماتي عن الرد ننتظر جديدك.... شكرا |
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nice poem
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woooooooooooooooooooow
Unable to speak for Sani serious subject I Hohuzein for why sadness smile great Creativity and brilliance you are no words described your creativity Continued creativity shine and Miss Coco Smile suit you more I'm not good at complimenting Excuse hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh https://www.graphicsgrotto.com/clipar...cthankyou1.jpg |
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