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My Second poetry - Around That GardeN - شعر بالإنجليزي

رد: My Second poetry - Around That GardeN - شعر بالإنجليزي

1- Aroumd that Garden , sounds of tree

2- Always my feeling motviate to be keen

3- by the time what can we be free

4- i searhing the place will we be meet

5- much time & hours , also some weeks

6- planing to be waiting , that,s to be

7- asking myself m answer on me

8- how can u feel , how can i feel

9- my heart is fine , due you who steal

10 - as the burning of sun , thinking to belive

11- i have seen some one , you are here

12 - lets go to the future , see wht i see

13- we wish to see that view , reach to stage of keen

14 - raning , snowing , freezing , geeeeez

15-difficult of days , the weather wasn,t beat

16- with all of that the standred is not here

17- he will be standing to seasons of years

18 - close your eyes lets say , one two three

رد: My Second poetry - Around That GardeN - شعر بالإنجليزي

Thank you MY BROTHER
NICE POEM
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رد: My Second poetry - Around That GardeN - شعر بالإنجليزي

welcome brother
what are all of this creativeness?
perfect ...fantastic
really I liked it .... enjoyed read

اقتباس:

close your eyes lets say , one two three

that was the sweetest
very very very wonderful

oh brother
كل شوي اقول لاختي هذا البيت مررة حلو
واقرأ البيت الي بعده واقول لا هذا احلى
masha allah on you
extremely wonderful
I can't say more than you are creative
masha allah
allah bless you
thanks to you for put it here
allah pless you

رد: My Second poetry - Around That GardeN - شعر بالإنجليزي

يحجز .. لي عودة ><
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baack
our legend
masha allah on you
really i wondering what I must to write !!!
no idea ..no clue
masha allah
this time .. I won’t find any word to describe your poetry
allah save you

but ..when i read it
i found a lot og nice meaning ..alot of sincere feelings and honist too
masha allah
I surprised from your ability
mmm..no abilty
not from your poetry words too .. maybe from your imagination

كيف اتصورت الموقف واستطعت تشعرنا بالجو اللي يحيطه
ماشاء الله تبارك الرحمن

to chose this words ..to join it together which give us this nice meaning
masha allah on you
thanks alot to give me this chance which made me feel by this nice feeling

mmm..the best syllable
mmm.. last one of course
^^
and maybe this one

اقتباس:

8- how can u feel , how can i feel

9- my heart is fine , due you who steal

or this too

اقتباس:

11- i have seen some one , you are here

اقتباس:

12 - lets go to the future , see wht i see

ماشاء الله .. كلها على بعضها لها جو حلو .. ما تقدر تفصلهم عن بعض

mmm...just
its really cant express by any words
masha allah on you
الله يحميك ويحفظك من كل عين حسود
استمتعت بالقراءة
نتظر جديدك
thanks alot
^^

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