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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : won,t be yours


Miss CoCo
07-12-2012, 08:45 PM
http://im19.gulfup.com/2012-07-12/1342114628811.jpg (http://www.monms.com/vb)


peace on you guys
how are you
how are your kitties
hope they are fine
mmmmmmmmmm
i know ...i know
the poster is small
and um too lazy to make it larger
let,s begin
..................



Empty eyes




Hollow promises




countless lies




whose nightmare is this?




Give me a trace in this foggy road




I'm getting crazy ..every one had been told




Just I'll say to you all




I've been fooled




By a lifeless doll




Just tell me for




The heaven sake




Which way ..




I should take




If all my dreams




Were mere fake




Turn the hour hand back wards




My heart won't be yours




................




Fast ..fast




I've been running fast




I've been chased by




my colorless past




things are different ..from what they seem




can any body ..hear my scream




singing alone




knowing that ..life goes on




can't be stopped ..or trembled by




my luck stone




just with out ..why ..because




my silly heart




won't be yours




hope you liked it:evil_lol:


see ya

كيني
07-12-2012, 09:08 PM
:006::006::006::006::006:
oooooh yaaaa my darling...always shining..i liked it very very much...and i touched the madness in the poster as u called it..let me ask u a Q for whom those words??confess??
:rose::rose::rose:

لارسا
07-12-2012, 09:28 PM
WOOOooooOw...so good..the title ,the picture as well as the smart idea..u r talented sis.

~ملكة الاحساس~
07-12-2012, 10:35 PM
Thanks so very beautiful sister Thread
Dzaki God's goodness Tqubla traffic

العنكبوت
07-13-2012, 06:30 AM
wooooow~~

ضوء الفجر
07-15-2012, 12:03 PM
welcome sis
how are you
^^
im really happy to see you dear
sorry for late ..
ehhem
masha allah .. as we know you sis
i liked the topic form his title
evey thing made me say .. you are shine .. able to be write like this meaning
which include a lot of things
maybe thats crazy but .. however i think won't be yours .. its hurtl
just to knowing .. i hate the sad end
><
this what i called it .. professional
masha allah
with all of that .. i cant discribe what i felt by words
^^

finally
please .. let me enjoy
let me swim .. farther and farther on the ocean of your ideas
waitting your best dear
^^

A H M E A D
07-15-2012, 11:31 PM
Welcome
again :Mon63:
A beautiful poem
You have creative ideas:Mon40:
........
As usual
Strong girl
Smart girl
and realistic:Mon11:

I've been running fast

I've been chased by

my colorless past ... i love it
................... :Mon106:

Miss CoCo
07-30-2012, 04:26 PM
wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow
what a poem
i liked it sooo much
and i liked that crazy girl
her hair is pretty
what an artist you are coco

Amazing Misa
07-31-2012, 11:06 PM
you did a great job
did you write it , it's really awesome
but i can't believe you wrote it

misa.
08-10-2012, 01:00 PM
wwwwoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwww
you are an awesome writer
amazing poem
keep up the excellent work