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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : escape to that hole


Miss CoCo
04-26-2012, 08:52 PM
peace on you guys
how are you
as usual
there is some thing new
I hope you like it
and the most important thing
to understand the idea in it

http://im17.gulfup.com/2012-04-26/133544804631.jpg

You told me once
That the life is a game
The chances of wining
Is not the same
And asked me there
About my dream
I didn't answer
I was a fool
I didn't think about
And now..
I forgot my heart
And I'll tell you that
My only hope
My only dream
To stay alive ..to hear your scream
Oh lord !!
For the heaven sake
In this world
How should I
Know the real ..from the fake
Lost ..lonely..sad and pain
With out cry ..or complain
I can live ..live that all
If only my fate …tell me where is that hole
…………………
Live and live
There is nothing to save
Forget the past
If you're brave
There is no one worth
To be his memory's slave
That's you're words
That’s your letters
You learned me to smile
In all matters
Now my life
taught me to ignore my needs
To complete the way
Where ever it leads
The law of living
Is to give and take
in all the ways
your heart will break
how could I know what the days hide
in my lost ..there's no guide
to tell by …a star or
a crystal ball
oh my fate ..just lead me to that hole
………………..
and that,s all
hope you enjoyed
see ya :icon31:

Smile hope
04-26-2012, 08:57 PM
:006:Thanks to wonderful words
:angel:Wu stopped amazing
There are some words of others interconnected
And to my kinky Salta
Commendable my honey a second time
:tears::icon31:Adam is love between us and all Muslim women

βĹỐốĎỴ βŘǺΪЙ
04-26-2012, 09:20 PM
wooooooooooow

that's too cute

i like what you said

it's to smooth nice and amazing

tooooo many thanks to you sis

Miss CoCo
04-26-2012, 09:24 PM
:006:Thanks to wonderful words

:angel:Wu stopped amazing
There are some words of others interconnected
And to my kinky Salta
Commendable my honey a second time

:tears::icon31:Adam is love between us and all Muslim women


thanks for the wonderful comment
thanks for your kindness and sweet words
:icon31:see ya

Miss CoCo
04-26-2012, 09:28 PM
wooooooooooow



that's too cute

i like what you said

it's to smooth nice and amazing

tooooo many thanks to you sis




wooooooooooooooow
bloody is here:eek:
it,s honour for me
happy to know that you liked it
and thanks for your nice comment
come again
:evil_lol:I hope you,ll repeat that nice visit

تيماري ساما
04-26-2012, 09:41 PM
wooooooooooooOoooooooooooow
you come to us more of the most beautiful poems
:006: Thanks to the style of this poem and beautiful words ........ we want more from you

Miss CoCo
04-26-2012, 09:48 PM
wooooooooooooOoooooooooooow
you come to us more of the most beautiful poems
:006: Thanks to the style of this poem and beautiful words ........ we want more from you
thanks for the beautiful words of you temo
glad to know you liked it :teeth:

A H M E A D
04-27-2012, 10:03 PM
Welcome sister
Again
You wrote
I feel jealous
from where
?these ideas com
Always girls in your poems ..... strong,
As usual
The idea is stronger than words
We all look for that hole
I hope
that I find it one day
Such as Alice in Wonderland
..........................
Live and live
There is nothing to save
Forget the past
If you're brave
There is no one worth
To be his memory's slave
.............................
Interesting poem
:icon31:God bless you

Miss CoCo
04-27-2012, 10:16 PM
Welcome sister

Again
You wrote
:angel:and again you answered
I feel jealous
:evil_lol:glad to know that
from where
?these ideas com
you won,t beleve me if I told you:blushing:
Always girls in your poems ..... strong,
As usual
maybe ..or they are realistic
The idea is stronger than words
We all look for that hole
I hope
that I find it one day
Such as Alice in Wonderland
hope you find it one day ..i wish that for every one ,,including my self
..........................
Live and live
There is nothing to save
Forget the past
If you're brave
There is no one worth
To be his memory's slave
.............................
Interesting poem

:icon31:
God bless you

thanks for your nice comment
god bless you bro :blush-anim-cl:

βĹỐốĎỴ βŘǺΪЙ
04-27-2012, 10:41 PM
wooooooooooooOoooooooooooow
you come to us more of the most beautiful poems
:006: Thanks to the style of this poem and beautiful words ........ we want more from you

me 2

i want moooore

u have a unique style

ضوء الفجر
05-07-2012, 04:22 PM
will back again ensha allah
^^

welcome sis .. welcome our shine memeber
as i promised i back
sorry for late .. ><

lets start
as usually nothing except the shine ..the wonderful words are falling from your pen
so nice masha allah
^^

i willnt ask you how could you do that .. but i ask you to complete your shine here
your interesting talent .. masha allah
so sis .. surprised us.. show us your best .. as we waitting from you
finally .. thanks a lot sis
im really happy and enjoy
^^

allah saving you
good bye

Miss CoCo
05-10-2012, 04:00 PM
will back again ensha allah

^^

welcome sis .. welcome our shine memeber
as i promised i back
sorry for late .. ><
welcome dear..happy to see you again
not at all..no problemo
the most important ..you came bak
lets start
as usually nothing except the shine ..the wonderful words are falling from your pen
so nice masha allah
^^
I don,t knowwhat to say
thanks for your kindness :a575f059f95cc9160e9
i willnt ask you how could you do that .. but i ask you to complete your shine here
your interesting talent .. masha allah
so sis .. surprised us.. show us your best .. as we waitting from you
finally .. thanks a lot sis
im really happy and enjoy
^^
happy to know how you feel
and happier to know that you liked my crazy thoughts
allah saving you
good bye
good bye
promise you more :0005:


thanks :rose:

ŀðśŧ Đřểàm
05-10-2012, 04:39 PM
Hello
?? how are you
I hope you are okay
wow .. wow .. wow
really I can't describe my feeling
but it's so wonderful & awesome
you are a special writer
in a fact
,
life is nothing without hope
so we should be always hopeful
thanks alot for your amazing poem
I hope you enjoy reading my comment
god bless you
keep up don't stop
goodbye

Miss CoCo
05-10-2012, 04:43 PM
Hello

?? how are you
I hope you are okay
wow .. wow .. wow
really I can't describe my feeling
but it's so wonderful & awesome
you are a special writer
in a fact
,
life is nothing without hope
so we should be always hopeful
thanks alot for your amazing poem
I hope you enjoy reading my comment
god bless you
keep up don't stop
goodbye

welcome here sweet sis
happy to know that you,ve enjoyed
and happier to read your comment
thanks
and thanks again for your encourgement
see ya :007:

Sande
05-10-2012, 05:25 PM
Welcome my sister
How are you?
..........

I liked your words
But I did not understand some words
Because my language is So bad
You right in your words !!
Life is a game of winner and loser in the end
I call on God to me and you , makes a winner in the end
..........

God gives you good efforts on wellness
Thanks and evaluation
Waiting for the next
Greetings

Miss CoCo
05-10-2012, 06:51 PM
Welcome my sister

How are you?
..........

I liked your words
But I did not understand some words
Because my language is So bad
You right in your words !!
Life is a game of winner and loser in the end

I call on God to me and you ,
makes a winner in the end
..........

God gives you good efforts on wellness
Thanks and evaluation
Waiting for the next

Greetings


welcome dear sister
fine thanks
thank you for asking about
happy to know that you liked my crazy words
about that words
i don,t think so
your language is v.good as i see
:wink2:maybe i use some words but in weird places
hope you enjoyment
with every poem
see ya
thanks for sharing me how you feel :cupidarrow:

كيني
05-16-2012, 12:58 AM
I have fallen in love..the love of your words..you used to shock me at all the times that I read what you wrote..what can I say?? I feel I am nothing comparing with you...that thing doesn't annoy me at all..I am proud of you..you are a diamond