Darker than Black

[Miss CoCo]

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peace on you frinds
I hope you all right
I,ve just finished this moments ago
:showoff:I hope you like it
................
Have a time to hear
Have a heart to share
The story of girl ..maybe far
Or near
She ,s been told to seek
Just seek and seek
Not to cry ..not to speak
Just like war
She had to fight
There is no rose. no star in sight
Fight and fight
Who is the wrong ..
Who is the right
There is no space for going back
The future seems. darker than black
*******
The way was hard
Tears and tears
Sadness and fears
There wasn't a trace
In that endless race
Memories was the only way
That led her to his face
Oh lord ..how could be
The only escape for her from night
The shining light ..that pure bright
Charmed eyes ..
Darker than black
******
Look here ..or there
Her broken wings
In every where
The life was a stair
She had to climb
The songs of fate
Weren't in rhyme
On and on
On the stair
The screams of lost
Can not be bear
The tones were pure
When he was here
No time to talk
No way back
Her hope had eyes
Darker than black
..................
and that,s all
see ya:0005:

[ضوء الفجر]

مهمممم .. لي عودة ان شاء الله
^^
تسلمي قلبو .. مقدما

welcome again
masha allah on you
cant describe what i felt
but what i can say .. a lot of feeling
lonely.. grudge .. hate .. sad
or fight.. shine ..
and maybe strong
whatever ..it was hurt this what i believe on
thanks alot coco
^^

Just seek and seek
Not to cry ..not to speak

how poor ... i wonder if any one can help her ><
تاثرت كثير .. XDD
يعطيكي العافية خيتو
كثير حبيت الموضوع .. .. but the sadness covered it
right.. ><
ماشاء الله خيتو .. كتباتك كثير حلوة .. خسارة ان كان المعنى حزين
^^
sorry but i felt that
thanks a gain
see you

[Miss CoCo]

مهمممم .. لي عودة ان شاء الله

^^
تسلمي قلبو .. مقدما

welcome again
masha allah on you
cant describe what i felt
but what i can say .. a lot of feeling
lonely.. grudge .. hate .. sad
or fight.. shine ..
and maybe strong
whatever ..it was hurt this what i believe on
thanks alot coco
^^

Just seek and seek
Not to cry ..not to speak

how poor ... i wonder if any one can help her ><
تاثرت كثير .. XDD
يعطيكي العافية خيتو
كثير حبيت الموضوع .. .. but the sadness covered it
right.. ><
ماشاء الله خيتو .. كتباتك كثير حلوة .. خسارة ان كان المعنى حزين
^^
sorry but i felt that
thanks a gain
see you




welcome back sis
you don,t know my happiness for your response
^^glad to know you liked it
cant describe what i felt
and that what I want dear :evil_lol:
but the sadness covered it
right.. ><
hhhhhhhhhh
oh dear ..this is the happier one of my writings

ماشاء الله خيتو .. كتباتك كثير حلوة .. خسارة ان كان المعنى حزين
^^
تسلميلي عالأطراء
يمكن ان كان المعنى حزين ..يكون اجمل
wait for the next one
it will be covered with evil ...I hope you like evil :evil_lol:
thanks alot lighto ..thanks alot:blushing:

[A H M E A D]

تم فك الحجز

[سحر الخيال]

ماشاء الله تبارك الرحمن ...ماشاء الله وبارك
is this on of your writings?
I liked it
your style in writing very very wonderful masha allah
God save you sis
the topic full of sadness but it's beautiful too
she made me felt pity on her
poor girl >< .....her life is affictive
thanks sis to show us one of your writings
and go ahead

[Big Boss]

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[الكيوبية]

حته انا -_-

اجانب مب عرب -_-

خلوكم عرب

[A H M E A D]

What a stylish text
On the contrary, I see a realistic
girl
Living reality in all its details
Despite the grief and circumstances
Still looking for what she want
No time to talk
No way back
Her hope had eyes
Darker than black
I
felt that in its opinion that what She looking for
More powerful than the darkness that prevails in her world
Explicitly
I barely envy her on this vision

I hope that you keep in such poems written by
Successful long as you:icon31:

[Miss CoCo]

What a stylish text
but not stylish as your response bro
On the contrary, I see a realistic
girl
Living reality in all its details[/FONT
:007:] god bless you for that notice
[FONT=Georgia]Despite the grief and circumstances
Still looking for what she want
No time to talk
No way back
Her hope had eyes
Darker than black
I
felt that in its opinion that what She looking for
More powerful than the darkness that prevails in her world
Explicitly
I barely envy her on this vision

I hope that you keep in such poems written by
Successful long as you:icon31:
thanks for sharing your vision ..maybe its the closer one for my aim
hope you like darkness and evil ..to wait for the next one
see ya :smoke1:

[Miss CoCo]

ماشاء الله تبارك الرحمن ...ماشاء الله وبارك
is this on of your writings?
I liked it
your style in writing very very wonderful masha allah

God save you sis
the topic full of sadness but it's beautiful too
she made me felt pity on her
you don,t have to
she,s happy because she,s living with hope and an aim
poor girl >< .....her life is affictive
thanks sis to show us one of your writings
and go ahead

god bless you for the wonderful response :blush-anim-cl:

[Miss CoCo]

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sorry to know that..next time I,ll bring the translate with me ..thanks for coming :teeth::

[Miss CoCo]

حته انا -_-

اجانب مب عرب -_-

خلوكم عرب

:evil_lol::evil_lol::evil_lol:
thanks for coming by my pure arabian sis

[ضوء الفجر]

oh.. thanks for your answer
happy to read it
ohhh... wooow






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evil.. evil
sis coco .. i thought ... nothing
just im waitting
^^
thanks again

[كيني]

دروووحي بابا تغطي وناامي...خربتي مزااجي..حتة مادوخت رووحي وقريتها...الله ينطيج...

[sebastian]

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[تيماري_سان]

:006::006:thank you so much
this english is correct and no spelling mistake
nice work

[Fubukii]

God Mchae topic received more than wonderful creative hands
And I hope to see Jdiedk always
This subject is not described
Not Thermna of your posts

[العنكبوت]

السلام عليكم ورحمه الله وبركاته

شكرا يا مبدعه الانجليزي

شكرااا

[Amazing Misa]

i liked your poem very much it's a little sad but the sadness gave your
poem a nice flavor
it's rhymed and perfect
thanx for sharing us this amazing poem
see ya soon

[misa.]

بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم
you are awesome how could you wright something like this
it's wonderful gift
you're so talented
i can't describe how nice is the poem was
keep going
don't let us down

[SON GOKU]

يسلمووووووووووووووو

[كيني]

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لا تصدكين حالج...دااسمع دكه حزينة....^ ^