coloured rain_poem

[Miss CoCo]

peace on you my friends
this is one of my poems in english ..I hope you ,ll enjoy
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the facts had shown ..


the sun had dawn


No mask will do .


.nor a fake gown


The peace will come .


.in every land


So ..why you ,re here ?


Open your eyes ..and give me your hand


The dark won't end..


if you didn't stand


Did you asked your self ..about that rain ??


How can it heal the soul ..and wash all the pain??


It’s the want of life ..in that drops


Which get to our hearts ..with out any maps


Colourless drop ..had the secret of living


All the colors of the earth ..


From its giving ..


Because it hadn't been here in vain


So are you ..me and every one


We have a rule ..


In this play ..


we have to act ..


we have to stay


to make the right ..


and wait for light


just ..take that in sight

and that,s it
have a good time when you read it
see ya :006:

[تيماري ساما]

woooooOoooooow
whats this my sister
oh!!!!!!!!!!
thank you very match
see you

[Smile hope]

Thank you very much
What are these words
O creator
I enjoyed Balaqrap
I hope to always reconcile
Commendable
see you>

[ســـيـبـرو]

wooooow
you are a wonderful lass !!
thank you very much
this is a nice poem
and you well done
I like the name it`s beautiful ^_^

[كيني]

oooh,yeaaaaaah my darling this is the job..u created as usual...the clutch is so seemly with the subject..add-on the idea and the words are good...I want more^ ^..my greetings

[misa.]

this is amazing i can,t
belive it you, re awsome
you can create a road for being a star
wish you the best of all
see you
^-^

[Miss CoCo]

Thank you very much
What are these words
O creator
I enjoyed Balaqrap
I hope to always reconcile
Commendable
see you>

it,s my pleasure you enjoyed it
thank you sis
wish you the best:icon31:

[Miss CoCo]

wooooow
you are a wonderful lass !!
thank you very much
this is a nice poem
and you well done
I like the name it`s beautiful ^_^
oh glad to know you loved it
:blushing:thanks for you love

[Miss CoCo]

oooh,yeaaaaaah my darling this is the job..u created as usual...the clutch is so seemly with the subject..add-on the idea and the words are good...I want more^ ^..my greetings
wait for more dear
:evil_lol:wait for more ..special le 3yoonk
hhhhhhhhhh
I meant your eyes

[Miss CoCo]

this is amazing i can,t
belive it you, re awsome
you can create a road for being a star
wish you the best of all
see you
^-^
you ,re the awsome love
:006:all my best wishes for you ..glad to hear your opinion

[فتاه القمر]

Machae God .. Great
Words were very impressive,
.. I liked a lot ..
Keep on this way

Thank you for your topic


ヤナ

[الكيوبية]

لا انا ما فهمت كل الكلمات شو قالولكم انا معلمة انقليزي

[ضوء الفجر]

حجز .. ^^
يحتاج جلسة

baaaacckkk
how wonderful sis .. first sorry for late
><
let me sharing with you .. this nice words
masha allah
you dont know .. how i enjoyed
yes.. this what i like
a lot of wisdoms a lot of truths
fight ..light .. right.. all this will give you the realy live
hope.. what we have to full by
^^
We have a rule ..


In this play ..


we have to act ..


we have to stay


to make the right ..


hey sis .. where did you hide all this
its really awesome masha allah
^^
So are you ..me and every one
soo great .. ^^ .. nice masha allah

Did you asked your self ..about that rain ??
How can it heal the soul ..and wash all the pain??
It’s the want of life ..in that drops
Which get to our hearts ..with out any maps

i liked it
how beateful sis .. how .. i dont have any thing to say
but .. the meaning which you got it .. and how you describe it .. that what i amazed from
allah save you
really you have a good imagination
finally..
the meaning which you made .. made me stand by all the thanks for you
have you get it .. XDD
very excellent ..
it's fewer what can I say about your poem
see ya soon sis
^^

[محبة ساسكي]

WOW
that's cool
thank you very much

[Miss CoCo]

Machae God .. Great
Words were very impressive,
.. I liked a lot ..
Keep on this way

Thank you for your topic


ヤナ
thanks for your response ..and hope you enjoyed it:teeth:

[Miss CoCo]

WOW
that's cool
thank you very much

thanks you dear
for sharing your opinion
hope you enjoyed it

[A H M E A D]

Beautiful ... Beautiful
Do you demand a revolution:005:????
I think the idea is stronger than words
Or perhaps the words simplest this time
.....................
My respect for your pen
And for your thoughts:icon30:

[ضوء الفجر]

تم فك الحجز .. ^^

[تيماري_سان]

this is the best poem I had ever seen

[شموخ بنت شيوخ]

woooooooooooooooow
Thank you

[العنكبوت]

السلام عليكم ورحمه الله وبركاته

شكرا على ابداعك في الانجليزي


وتعجز كلماتي عن الرد

ننتظر جديدك....

شكرا

[GOKU]

nice poem

[hikaru hitachii]

woooooooooooooooooooow

Unable to speak for Sani serious subject


I Hohuzein for why sadness smile great


Creativity and brilliance you are no words described your creativity


Continued creativity shine and Miss Coco

Smile suit you more


I'm not good at complimenting Excuse

hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh



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