My first English Poetry

[Elomar]

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته


Hey everyone, what's up?
Sooo, I've wrote my first English poetry! :D
I was just bored and I decided to DO SOMETHING NEW! :)
It's kind of funny & romantic. O_O
Other words: crazy poetry! XD
I hope you like it.
Here we go:

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you're smile make me fly!
If you're sad, I'm going to die!
BUT, if you betrayed me, and you made me cry;
I'll kick you too high, to the point where I can see you flying in the sky!! :p
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So, What are you think, crazy huh? ×_O
~Wanna see you comments~
See u

[gogeta]

very fantastic poetry
and the words of it very cute ass well
thxxxxxxx you soooo much for poetry
my Greetings

[Hero.]

so prity
thank you very much

[سحر الخيال]

وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته
welcome fiend
haha
nice...it's beautiful
masha allah
thanks brother

[ضوء الفجر]

:smoke1:
وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله

welcome friend
nice to meet you
^_^
hahaha
nice very nice
really .. i like it
i like to raed any thing by english launguge
as you know .. its improve your skils
^_^
any way
its a first topic .. about poetry
good choice

but .. all of this words .. for who ?!! XD
look
you wrote .. going to die
better to you ..mmm
try to get his sadness or better to say
try to make him happy
^_^
becuse .. when you like some one by this crazy shape .. haha
im kidding
lets back
you must to help him
and but him out of his sadness
is it right
?!!
^_______^
thanks sarutobe for this nice and funny petry
im witing more from you
so .. go ahead
and keep moving by this way
^^
thanks a lot
see you
:bye1:

[ʕۣʔيعہّذبنٌي,غہہلاٌآآكـٌ]

Thank you

[Hollow MasteR]

So Cute masha allah

for you

if u wana write topic , make like that
so tht why people writing by fast
i,m jelous from who wrote some poet
cuese its injuerd my body and made me Fat

note: i made it through 1 minitue
how is that kids??


haha
so coool


keep your way in& development & improvment & evolution too
so
see ya in another topic
we,re waiting a newest

[A H M E A D]

GOD BLESS YOU
NICE WORDS
KEEP UP

[ώ ђ м❥«]

Thank you

[asdv]

hhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
very nice poetry
I enjoyed it so much
thanks for the wonderful topic

[miranda cosgrove]

Thank you

[siiila1]

Thanks

[Elomar]

Thank all of you guys for your awesome comments! And I've something to say: I''m back!!
I know its long time, but thanx a lot for everything u did. I mean it.. thank you :)

[Sasuke.Uchiha]

Very cool
it's an Excellent poetry
Congratulations

[Anzu Mazaki]

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How are you , friend
??

Hahahaha

Wow sO niCe my brother

Really It's wonderful

Thanks so much


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[hinamori amu]

Wooooooooooooooow

I can't say anything

because it's so wonderful poetry

thanks for the new topic

and keep up don't stop

Bye

[Fubukii]

very fantastic poetry
Thank you

[aizen sama]

u r d best
nice poetry bro
keep going

[vitran]

thank you very much
KEEP UP

[J O K E R]

It's crazy eye

My problem I love the madness

Continued in this manner will become insane class Alaolh

Thank you

BIG J O K E R